Challenge Yourself -Asylum After Dark – The Remedy by Crimson Quintessence

Counting The Days To Insanity

Counting The Days To Insanity

The Challenge:   The power just went out and all Asylum doors are unlocked.

The power just went out and all Asylum doors are unlocked.
Tonight my horrible honeys I’ve made you a murderer.
You writing challenge is this:
A short story or poem.
You get 1 chance to commit only 1 murder.
Make it count…

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Sit there, if you will,

whimpering in your dark little corner.

I can hear your knees knocking together from here on my perch.

Your yellow drug-stained teeth, rattling together like a broken awning swinging in high winds.

I can even hear the rush of air from your sphincter clenching shut.

Guess that worries you some, considering where you house your head most of your waking hours.

My heels click as I stride across the marble floor having jumped from my perched observation point in the house, echoing in your ears like rapid-fire shots out of a machine gun.

My face calm, my breath slow and steady, tapping my favorite weapon of choice in my left palm, licking my lips in anticipation of the assault you’re about to receive.

Sit still!

squirming coward, your movements will only make your punishment last longer.  

No matter to me, I’d enjoy the delay and your cries of agony.

I smirk as I remember how I got you here.

You thought midnight romp.

I knew something far different.

When I ripped the cord of the lamp from the west wall I didn’t think of the lamps weight, not at all.

In fact, it happened so fast I’m not sure I registered thought much at all.

But, I felt, oh, how I felt.

Rage,

a searing heat, 

it rose from deep inside me.

Explosive!

ravenous almost.

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I swung that lamp at your head like a professional baseball player swinging at his last-chance grand-slam in the world series.

Carr-aaack!

The hit heard around the world,

and just like that,

blood-spatter, and out you went.

Dragging your lanky-ass over to Nana’s wing-back chair came easy to me.

There was so much adrenaline coursing through me, I felt like a freight-train on full-throttle, no brakes.

The barbed-wire was fun, wrapping it around you like a python wraps itself around its prey.

Almost made me orgasmic,

then you twitched and took my moment from me.

Son-of-a-bitch!

Still, you try to take control.

But that’s okay,

I’m not upset,

not about that any way.

I’m going to take my time with you my dear, oh, yes, I am.

I remember that first night when we were at Dale’s party.

You said you had a surprise for me and took me upstairs.

Then, like the pig you are, you dropped your pants and I said wow, that’s my surprise, you brought me up here to show me a penis?

Yes, you said, with a smart-ass grin on your face.

Then you changed your tone and said well?

I said well what?

And you and your arrogant tongue spit out — Wax it.

How vile I thought, but we both know that I left my teeth marks in your dick that night,

don’t we darling?

Look at you, all dressed up like mommy’s little blonde cherub.

Too bad she doesn’t know what a nasty little cunt of a man you really are.

But I’m going to remedy that, I’ll show her on your behalf when I fillet you and pose you like an awkward statue impaled on a spigot and run through on your front lawn.

Hannibal would be so proud to know me right now.

You my dearest have been weighed and measured and you’ve been found wanting.

This will be the remedy of all remedies.

A song for all melodies.

Your undoing.

Your fate.

Lifeless, like the squished slug by the garden gate.

Gone and forgotten.

Dust in the wind.

My arms raised,

the blows came,

the remedy delivered.

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Break Free

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Break free from the ties that bind you 

if they nestle inside they will consume you

Break free from the grip that is strangling you

you’ve been trapped for to long in the cage of despair

once, on step closer to the edge of your sanity

now, direction has changed and your journey nowhere near over.

Your days of mental entrapment now gone

the battle within is now done

stand tall girl, you know you are strong

roll with it girl, it’s an awakening

you clearly have won

walk in a stride

hold your head up with pride

you faced the devil and stood your ground

there’s no more truth to be found.

Rise up from the dark and spread your wings like a hawk

take flight to the sky as you roar

you are not a victim of his any more.

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**Dedicated to all my sisters who have suffered mental abuse at the hands of another.**

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Slick Black Cat

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Slick, smooth and sleek

making your moves on the weak

sauntering in like Don Juan with a slick and slithering tongue

Black cat in a tuxedo

verbally whining and dining the ladies

tucking each one in a pocket for future use

each one serving a purpose

pitting one against the other

for your entertainment erection 

STOP!

oh wait, my mistake,

impotence of a physical nature

Let’s read to them with slick lips

maybe they’ll get close to the screen

as they touch themselves and strip

making all your crimson honey drip

black cat slips in once more

touching her down to her core

making her beg him for more

but it’s time that she settle the score

Fooled by this one no more

kicks her heels up and walks out the door

black cat lying dead on the floor

she’s not his victim, not any more

Made him hurt right down to his own core

Playing poor me for the attention of more

Shhhh!

Stop talking

I’m bored.

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Burned up in the Sun

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Head held high

Arms wide open

let the past burn up into the sun

no longer carrying these troubles of mine

learned where my heart is 

the burdens are gone

burned into the sun.

Dreams in my suitcase

unpacked and fine with them

I’m on a mission

it’s out of my system

burned into the sun.

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Found a way through it 

no more web of silence a burden

not stranded on an island

it’s burned up in the sun.

No longer lost

no longer searching

I’ve spread my wings 

no longer hurting

I’ve opened up my eyes

I let it all burn up in the sun.

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I’ve found a way to do me

dance through the fire

look up to the sun

I know I’m no liar

burned up in the sun

I remain flying higher

circling the flames of the sun.

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Blood

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The Blood is spilt
The soul will heal
The pain is felt by all who feel.

The will is strong and has no end
There’s nothing left here to defend.

Let fury go it’s been released
And shared with all who want to feast.

The time is now
The will is strong
This soul right here
is where you are strong.

Let it go and keep moving forward
Life are fulfilling and moving onward

The soul it grows and strengthens within
Remember that and you already win.

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The Water’s Edge

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I sat by the water’s edge

all I could hear was the water

flowing in a graceful trickle

I was at peace that day.

The gentle breeze danced on my skin

as it caused tiny little ripples

it was pleasing, so pleasing I dipped my feet in off the end of the dock.

As I sat there gazing out across the water I started to wonder…..

What legacy shall we leave behind for younger generation as they find their way here.

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The water is peaceful

so we shall leave peace

The water is calm

so we shall guide them to calmer days

The water is clear

so we shall leave them with clear thoughts of who they want to be

and make sure they don’t become muddled in who others want them to be.

The water makes us tingle

washes us clean

it removes the smoggy film from our eyes so that we may see truth

it lifts our spirits from dark shadows that want to hold us back.

Our legacy is here to make sure that every budding child who wants to write out their dreams as they see them, the way they want the world to see them, raw and real, not altered by another who distorts their visions.

Our legacy is to have the new step forward, learn from the old

thrive and leave as many rose petals as they can on the footpath.

Generation after generation will find their way to the water’s edge and like you and I, the birth of each pen will spill forth and flow always keeping the waterfalls flowing

and when the rains come the rivers will rise and the quills will dance.

Our legacy will never see death or its demise

because the words will always flow

An eternity of creativity will light up the night sky like fire flies

and they will dance.

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Velvet Tongue

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She circles around him

breathing in his scent

he is aware but all his defenses are spent

Perilous thirst,

she can hear the blood flowing through his veins

how she wants to take his pulse with her teeth

she needs that life-force to kill her every pain

her soul’s journey painted long ago 

a thousand years for a troubled soul.

He’s got no idea what awaits him 

how it’s about to unfold

she dances so well, never getting to close as she baits him

the silkiness of her hair brushes against his cheek

her fragrance, his favorite, making him weak

silent whispers deep in the night

dance through the mind with such delight

a fairytale dream, a velvet tongue

where his life ends, hers has only just begun.

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Free Again by Quintessence

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 Dust

Dust off the negativity

Dust off the pain

Dust off the ugliness others left on you with the rain.

Distance

Distance yourself from the binding chains keeping you silent

Distance yourself from the control that fell upon you from verbal violence.

Shake

Shake out through your fingertips the restraint of your words

Shake out inner energy that couldn’t burst through that old prisoned world.

You Are Free

You’re free now, to dance

You’re free now to take that scribing chance.

Free

Let your words flow

Let the pain go

Let the light in

Time to be Free Again.

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The Lure by Crimson Quintessence

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Cast the line

with baited hook

a glancing eye

a fatal look.

The hunter swift

circles its prey

devour another

day after day.

Cunning and slick

but the prey gets wise

slips from the trap

uncovering the hunter’s blind of disguise.

Freedom at last

blindfold removed and nothing obscure

eyes open wide fashioning new haute couture

ready for a long winter’s nap

far away from the lure.

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Challenge Yourself Weekend -rhythmic and rhyme rewrite the lyrics

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Rock and Rhyme Poetry Writing Exercise
The Exercise
All you need is a song.
A rhythmic and rhyme-y song without a lot of fancy runs. You’ll want a relatively simple tune. A short pop song will work well.

Rewrite the lyrics but keep the rhythm and rhyme scheme intact. You don’t have to replace the rhyme ring and sing with a rhyme like thing and bling. But you do need to find another rhyming pair (like dance and pants). Your rhymes can be as strict or as loose as you want.

If you do just a few of these, rhyming will start to come more naturally to you, and your rhymes will flow with greater ease.

Try to rewrite the song on your own, but if you’re really struggling, hit up a rhyming dictionary or a thesaurus.

Rock’n’Rhyme Challenge by Quintessence

Rock’n’Rhyme Remix.
(Set to the tune of When I’m Gone by Simple Plan)

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When I’m Done

I’m slayin it

I creep around here

deciding what I want to be

A human showing no care

decrepid misery

It’s like my darkness is most alluring

an encrypted mutiny

now I know deaths domination

I’ll seal your fate

you know how it’s gotta be

Oh-oh

Now I ain’t gotta play a den-mother to your clown

Oh-oh

I won’t be slack, your death is coming round

Oh-oh

I’ll have the kill come fast

gonna bring the torture

It’s grizzly, smells pungently

well so long, they’ll miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

They’re gonna miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

Administration, cunning whirlpools of the dead

smile it’s completely aggravating

I’ll make sure you meet your death (you meet your death)

Strife always dampens while I’m saturating in all my muses

smoother way, my other reality

but that’s how it’s gotta be

Oh-oh

Now I ain’t gotta play a den-mother to your clown

Oh-oh

I won’t be slack, your death is coming round

Oh-oh

I’ll have the kill come fast

gonna bring the torture

It’s grizzly, smells pungently

well so long, they’ll miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

They’re gonna miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

They’re gonna miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

They’re gonna miss you when I’m done

when I’m done

Let’s go!

 Don’t hook flack

been a slay say I

crime wanna heave uh troll to blind thee

wanna rake guts fine tonight

Applause every corpse I slay becomes a pasted glance

more wanna fake out squealing fury

because death don’t wait

this mess is up for you.

Oh-oh

Now I ain’t gotta play a den-mother to your clown

Oh-oh

I won’t be slack, your death is coming round

Oh-oh

I’ll have the kill come fast

gonna bring the torture

It’s grizzly, smells pungently

well so long, they’ll miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

They’re gonna miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

Ooh, ooh, ooh

They’re gonna miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

They’re gonna miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

They’re gonna miss you when I’m done

Ooh, ooh, ooh

They’re gonna miss you when I’m done

(music fade out)

Original Rewritten lyrics by Jilly G

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Rock’n’Rhyme Remix.
(Set to the tune of AC/DC – Highway to Hell)

Rotted Corpse in a Shell by Richard Bell

I am greasy
I am green
Seething danger under rotted hide
Gasping hissing
queasy creep
Eating everything that’s still alive
Bloated wheezing
Black blood slime
Clothes matted in blood and spew
Underground
Gotta climb
It’s the end I’m coming after you
A ROTTED CORPSE IN A SHELL
APOCALYPTIC DEMON’S SPELL
A ROTTED CORPSE IN A SHELL
THE DEVIL RANG THE EARTH’S DEATH KNELL
Cursed long swine
Leaking rennet
Bloody mouth just like a circus clown
Seared veal
Rotted shitted
Drag my entrails over stony ground
Pulsating
Out for Grue
Gore dripping brain lust clan
Stinking summer
Retching breeze
Cannibal resurrection man
A ROTTED CORPSE IN A SHELL
APOCALYPTIC DEMON’S SPELL
A ROTTED CORPSE IN A SHELL
THE DEVIL RANG THE EARTH’S DEATH KNELL
A ROTTED CORPSE IN A SHELL
A PUTRID GAG CAUSING SMELL
A ROTTED CORPSE IN A SHELL
CRACK THE SKULL AND SCOOP OUT THE GEL
A zombie life overground
Hell awaits…
A ROTTED CORPSE IN A SHELL.

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Here goes nothing
The Challenge by Peter Joyce

Set to the tune of Good Vibrations by Marky Mark and the Funky Bunch.

It’s the C to the V, the cheshirevenom
these are my sick sweet words, this ain’t no sermon

I like horror, the blood and the guts
It’s about the slicin the precision cuts

I like the scares, the thrill of the night
I’ll kill you all or I’ll give you a fright

my domain lasts but 140 words
standing aside from your psychobable herds

words from the heart to send you to hell
got to stop now my head starts to swell

It’s such a sweet sensation
Repeat x 3
It’s such a good vibration

no more disquises, I am out on m own
tweeting my thoughts through The Twilight Zone

I am coming, you know that is true
blood on my hands I’m blaming the Grue

death inspires me, the thrill of the kill
you can’t stop me with your red or blue pill

so it’s out there my prophecy of fate
bourne out of need rather than hate

It’s such a sweet sensation
Repeat x 3
It’s such a good vibration
It will be a revelation

you better run for your life,
this cheshirevenom is packin a knife

your Jason, your Michael and your Freddy are dead
It’s time for someone new to get in your head

you can feed me after midnight
and sleep all you need

you can walk on the moores
and sow all your seed

I wann ride your brain
and drive you insane

Over and out, going out on a high
and remember the end is nigh

It’s such a sweet sensation
Repeat x 3
It’s such a good vibration
It will be a revelation

FIN

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